Improving our blog comments

On Monday with James we had to look at other school's blogs and look for okay comments. 

Once we found one James told us to copy and paste it into the box at the top of the page.

Then in the box at the bottom we had to improve the comment and  turn it into an awesome blog comment.

We had to include a greeting, our name's and a positive statement a thoughtful statement and helpful statement, James also told us that it would be good if we included a question, he told us that if we had a good blog comment then we could start a conversation.